From d61ba71bd4cb875d882db3dec46d9c9b7d43b449 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Laurent Modolo <laurent@modolo.fr>
Date: Mon, 28 Sep 2020 14:38:45 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] fix typos in 1 and 2
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1_understanding_a_computer.md | 2 +-
2_using_the_ifb_cloud.md | 34 +++++++++++++++++-----------------
2 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
diff --git a/1_understanding_a_computer.md b/1_understanding_a_computer.md
index b84d11e..3df371f 100644
--- a/1_understanding_a_computer.md
+++ b/1_understanding_a_computer.md
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ You can find a [list of software licenses](https://www.gnu.org/licenses/license-
-[Instead of installing GNU/Linux on your computer you are going to learn to use the IFB Cloud](http://perso.ens-lyon.fr/laurent.modolo/unix/2_using_the_ifb_cloud.html)
+[Instead of installing GNU/Linux on your computer, you are going to learn to use the IFB Cloud.](http://perso.ens-lyon.fr/laurent.modolo/unix/2_using_the_ifb_cloud.html)
diff --git a/2_using_the_ifb_cloud.md b/2_using_the_ifb_cloud.md
index a5aacb0..8ee1f31 100644
--- a/2_using_the_ifb_cloud.md
+++ b/2_using_the_ifb_cloud.md
@@ -1,23 +1,23 @@
---
-title: IFB (Institu Français de bioinformatique) Cloud
+title: IFB (Institu Français de bio-informatique) Cloud
---
-# IFB (Institu Français de bioinformatique) Cloud
+# IFB (Institu Français de bio-informatique) Cloud
-[](http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/)
+[! [cc_by_sa](./img/cc_by_sa.png)] (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/)
Objective: Start and connect to an appliance on the IFB cloud
-Instead of working on your computer where you don't have an Unix-like OS or have limited right, we are going to use the [IFB (Institu Français de bioinformatique) Cloud]( https://biosphere.france-bioinformatique.fr/).
+Instead of working on your computer where you don't have an Unix-like OS or have limited right, we are going to use the [IFB (Institu Français de bio-informatique) Cloud]( https://biosphere.france-bioinformatique.fr/).
## Creating an IFB account
1. Access the [**https://biosphere.france-bioinformatique.fr/**](**https://biosphere.france-bioinformatique.fr/**) website
-2. On the top righ(First) step with GNU/Linux
+2. On the top right (First) steps with GNU/Linux
- Instead of working on your computer where you don't have an Unix-like OS or have limited right, we are going to use the [IFB (Institu Français de bioinformatique) Cloud]( https://biosphere.france-bioinformatique.fr/). For this you will need:
+ Instead of working on your computer where you don't have an Unix-like OS or have limited right, we are going to use the [IFB (Institu Français de bio-informatique) Cloud]( https://biosphere.france-bioinformatique.fr/). For this you will need:
1. Access the [**https://biosphere.france-bioinformatique.fr/**](**https://biosphere.france-bioinformatique.fr/**) website
2. On the top right of the screen click on <img src="/Users/laurent/Documents/formations/2020_08_UNIX/img/signin_ifb.png" alt="sign in" style="zoom:150%;" />
@@ -27,31 +27,31 @@ Instead of working on your computer where you don't have an Unix-like OS or have
6. Complete the form with your **Name**, **First Name**, **Town** and **Zip Code**. You can ignore the other field and click on **accept**.
7. Go to your **Groups** parameters on the top right 
8. Click on  and type **LBMC Unix 2020**
- 9. You can click on the **+** sign to candidate and wait to be accepted in the group
+ 9. You can click on the **+** sign to register and wait to be accepted in the group
## Starting the LBMC Unix 2020 appliance
To follow this practical you will need to start the **[LBMC Unix 2020](https://biosphere.france-bioinformatique.fr/catalogue/appliance/177/) ** appliance from the [IFB Cloud](https://biosphere.france-bioinformatique.fr/) and click on the  button after login with your account.
-In the IFB jargon, appliance means **virtual machine** (VM). Remember how an universal Turing machine can run any programs ? A virtual machine, is a simulation program, simulating a physical computer. VM's have the following advantages:
+In the IFB jargon, appliance means **virtual machine** (VM). Remember how a universal Turing machine can run any programs ? A virtual machine, is a simulation program, simulating a physical computer. VM's have the following advantages:
- Copies of the VM will be identical (there will be no differences between your running *LBMC Unix 2020 appliance* and mine )
-- Upon start the VM is reset to the *LBMC Unix 2020 appliance* state
-- You can break everything in your VM, terminate it and start a new one
+- Upon starting the VM is reset to the *LBMC Unix 2020 appliance* state
+- You can break everything in your VM, terminate it and start a new one.
To access to your appliance you can go to the [**myVM** tab](https://biosphere.france-bioinformatique.fr/cloud/)
-You will see the list of your running or starting appliances
+You will see the list of your running or starting appliances.
-**Don't forget to terminate your appliances at the end of the session by clicking on** 
+**Don't forget to terminate your appliances at the end of the session by clicking on** 
You will need to start this appliance at the start of each session of this course and terminate it afterward.
-The  symbol indicate that your appliance is starting.
+The  symbol indicates that your appliance is starting.
## Accessing the LBMC Unix 2020
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ You can open the **https** link next to the termination button of your appliance
-This mean that the https connection is encrypted with a certificate unknown to your browser. As this certificate is going to be destroyed when you terminate your appliance, we don't want to pay a certification authority to validate it. Therefore you can safely add an exception for this certificate.
+This means that the https connection is encrypted with a certificate unknown to your browser. As this certificate is going to be destroyed when you terminate your appliance, we don't want to pay a certification authority to validate it. Therefore you can safely add an exception for this certificate.
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ The webpage you will load will display only the following line:
achinea3e18205-1f8c-4ee1-995e-d33ef57afa3c login:
```
-To get your identifiant you can click on the **Params** next to the **https** link.
+To get your identification information you can click on the **Params** next to the **https** link.
**The password and the https links are one of the only things that going to change when you start a new appliance.**
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ Password:
-To copy / paste your password, you will need to perform a right click and select **past from browser**
+To copy / paste your password, you will need to perform a right-click and select **past from the browser.**
@@ -89,4 +89,4 @@ Then paste your password in the dialog box.
Don't worry the password will not be displayed (not even in the form of `*****`, so someone looking at your screen will not be able to guess it's length), you can press **enter** to log on your VM.
-[first steps in a terminal.](http://perso.ens-lyon.fr/laurent.modolo/unix/3_first_steps_in_a_terminal.html)
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+[First steps in a terminal.](http://perso.ens-lyon.fr/laurent.modolo/unix/3_first_steps_in_a_terminal.html)
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